Writing tactics. August 1, 2023

 I am rewatching Disney plus's Obi-Wan Kenobi miniseries. Ewan MacGregor did a great performance as he always does. The action scenes were great like they are in any Star Wars movie or show. The only real problem was the writing. A lot of it would have been better if it were used in the prequels. I would have preferred if Obi-Wan did not fight with Darth Vader. The only reason they included that, was so that he can come to see that Vader destroyed Anakin Skywalker, and therefore he could not call him Anakin anymore. That was to explain why Obi-Wan was calling him Darth in A New Hope. The reason he was doing that was it clearly was not until either the original trilogy or the prequels were being written that, Geroge Lucas decided Darth would be a title, not a name. It is also likely that at that point Lucas had not concluded if Vader was Luke's father. That said, a lot of that is what it is like with my writing. A lot of the things I did not conclude until I get to writing it, and some of it, I have planned ahead. Sometimes that works, sometimes it doesn't, but if you are interested in reading my books, click on the link. Smashwords.com